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    Glory in my Mind

    Ok I went ahead and submitted the story, thank you for the encouragement, time will tell what happens.


    Please remove this thread.

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    Flying in High in the Sky
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    Huh?

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    govt kontrakt projkt mgr
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    You should submit some articles to dirtrag.

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    is this fiction or what? a day dream? you are all over the place man.

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    Quote Originally Posted by James_spec View Post
    Huh?
    This

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    Keep pedaling
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    I understand the feeling of trying to catch a friend who is faster than I am.

    I thought it was a good post, but maybe you would get more positive feedback in the passion forum.

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    You have some writing skills.... I second the Dirt Rag idea...

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    Very well written. I had a good chuckle at some lines!

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    Great post. I enjoyed reading it and it made me laugh. I do second the opinion that you should post it in the Passion forum I think that group would definitely appreciate it.

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    Thank you guys, I will re post it in passion and see what happens

    Quote Originally Posted by b-kul View Post
    is this fiction or what? a day dream? you are all over the place man.
    Experimenting a little bit. Lemme know what you feel it is missing.

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    Yup, Passion will love this. Fits right in.

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    Where is the good part? You know, the romantic stuff.
    Raised in a Chicken-Coop by Chickens

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